Script:

Fade In:

Int. Class Room - Day

Bustling Chatter of students in the room awaiting the lesson to start. Teacher Enters

Teacher:
Alright class settle down. Thank the lucky stars
that I'm in a good mood today.

Confused mumbling comes from the students

Teacher:
Free seating for today. Sit with who you want

Students move around and switch seats - Guy is left sitting on his own looking disgruntled. Girl enters classroom - sits next to guy

Shot reverse shot - Both characters smiling/looking at each other when the other isn't looking. Bell is rung. Fade Out

Fade In:

Int. Q Block Hallway - Day

Guy is sitting staring at his phone writing and erasing messages to the girl

Cut

Ext. Church Wall - Day

Girl is with friends and is similarly writing and erasing messages to guy. After a few moments of this her friends call her away. Girl walks off, another student walks in front of the camera. Camera follows. Fade Out

Fade In:

Int. N Block Hallway

Student walks in front of the camera, panning to Guy walking through the hallway. Girl walks past him and he stops in the middle of the hallway. He turns and looks for her. Shot cuts to Girl behind a corner waiting for the Guy to come but he doesn't. She turns and walks into the bathroom. Fade Out.

Fade In:

Int. Class Room - Day

Girl walks through the classroom door and sees the Teacher standing and Guy already sitting down on the right

Teacher:
Please, take a seat

Girl slowly sits down. She is sat on the left. Teacher is inbetween the two

Teacher:
Ok you two, what's going on?

The two briefly look at each other then back at the teacher. They say nothing

Teacher:
Listen, I don't know what's happened
between the two of you, but I do know
that your grades started slipping at around
the same time. So whats happening?

Once again the two give each other a look, but nothing is said. Teacher sighs. Fade Out.

Fade In:

Int. Bridge-Tunnel - Day

A train passing by is heard. Girl is walking through the tunnel alone. Cuts to close up of someone's feet as they walk towards Girl, slowly panning up their body. Stranger runs and grabs the Girls bag and runs off. Girl screams

Ext. Bridge-Tunnel - Day

Guy is walking with headphones in, Girls scream is muffled out by music. Stranger runs into Guy and his headphones fall out. He sees the bag and grabs it. The Stranger tugs but doesn't get the bag off of the Guy. Stranger leans close into the Guy - Close up of Guys face as he falls down, Stranger runs off. Girl exits the tunnel and sees Guy on the floor bleeding. She screams and runs to him, holding his bloodied hand and applying pressure to his wound. Guys is muttering, barly able to say anything

Guy:
Hi. S-sorry for taking t-this long
to s-say anything.. I-m J-

Guy yelps out in pain. Girl's eyes are tearing up/crying, apologising profusely. A heart rate monitor is heard as the camera pans away from the two. Fade Out

Heart rate monitor continues and then flatlines. Title Card and Credits

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